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So you like Ouran too??
i luv it too
okajj I think this turned out quiet well :3 If you're having problems with real outlines, then you should try to draw over it in the end xD it doesn't look bad in certain areas, but like on the edges of their trousers it seems a bit strange to have thin red lines in it. (mainly it looks okay in the areas with brighter colours in it but funny in the ones with darker colours)
the roses are drawn well but they just don't appear that good because they're missing some contours (a hint, you can try to change the colour of the background just behind the flowers, so you spare some time ;3)
the shadow on stalks seem very uncoordinated lol, try to have some bigger places with shadow but repeat them less often ^^
aand finally (I am sorry, I sound like I'm trying to pull your pic down xD") you always bet more out of a pic if you choose the best image section, so next time cut the empty parts off, like the end of their legs in this one :3 it's strange to have them floating around like that. If you don't want to change the size of the picture you could also add a frame inside the picture to make a clear edge.
so, done with grumbling xD don't feel bad, your picture is still great, I'm often just very focussed on details
I love it! Your colouring is so smooth~
I was having issues with the linearting to so the colouring is kinda lazy~