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As I promised AGES ago I finally attempted to colour my twins drawing on photoshop. Its not quite finished but probably as good as its going to get for now cause I had too many problems linearting (so I deleted it). I'm actually overall very happy with how it turned out, the colour on the pic now make it look much nicer~!! :iconimhappyplz: I've never been more glad to have an Intuos Tablet though, makes life so much easier! This was done on my crappy Photoshop 7 which Im hoping to upgrade at some point. Anyways, hope you guys like it!
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*Octomantis Apr 7, 2012   Filmographer
Yay Twincest!
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Mood: Love ~ViaBakura Mar 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
HITACHIIN BROTHERS!!! :XD:

So you like Ouran too?? :D
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:iconseasaltsunset:
Yes, Ouran is one of my favourites :3
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~ViaBakura Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wehehehe :3

i luv it too :icononionx3plz:
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~Kuroi-Ryubi Sep 5, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
okay here i go >3 (I didn't intend to comment on your older ones since they're mostly from last year, only if you want me to?)

okajj I think this turned out quiet well :3 If you're having problems with real outlines, then you should try to draw over it in the end xD it doesn't look bad in certain areas, but like on the edges of their trousers it seems a bit strange to have thin red lines in it. (mainly it looks okay in the areas with brighter colours in it but funny in the ones with darker colours)
the roses are drawn well but they just don't appear that good because they're missing some contours (a hint, you can try to change the colour of the background just behind the flowers, so you spare some time ;3)
the shadow on stalks seem very uncoordinated lol, try to have some bigger places with shadow but repeat them less often ^^
aand finally (I am sorry, I sound like I'm trying to pull your pic down xD") you always bet more out of a pic if you choose the best image section, so next time cut the empty parts off, like the end of their legs in this one :3 it's strange to have them floating around like that. If you don't want to change the size of the picture you could also add a frame inside the picture to make a clear edge.
so, done with grumbling xD don't feel bad, your picture is still great, I'm often just very focussed on details
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:iconseasaltsunset:
Wow thanks~!! :heart: No I totally take this all and will try and use it in the next art I do. I like constructive criticism, it means I can take what people tell me and try and improve on my art ^^ This is pretty impressive critique to, again thanks ^^
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~Kuroi-Ryubi Sep 5, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you're very welcome x3
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~Tala-Grey Apr 13, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Hi!
I love it! Your colouring is so smooth~
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:iconseasaltsunset:
Haha smooth until you zoom up close =S lol
I was having issues with the linearting to so the colouring is kinda lazy~
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~Tala-Grey Apr 13, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Still it is pretty good! You will improve!~
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